還剩下什麼

修了一個學期的學術作文
看來 我一點長進都沒有
很難過 但要更加努力

以下是老師的評語:

I looked at your portfolio and so did another teacher on the course. we
discussed your problems with written English and the amount of correction
that the teacher had to carry out on your texts to get them to a readable
level. We recognised that you had tried to work on the portfolio and
improve your standard. We could not offer you a grade of "good", given
your weaknesses in basic grammar, limitations in vocabulary and style, and
the fact that your do not actually follow the portfolio guidelines.
However, we decided that we could give you a grade of 2 (= satisfactory)
rather than a 1 (= bare pass).